The Stallion and the Harp: Part 1 Blog Archive on January 29, 2011, 15:15

THE STALLION AND THE HARP is a submission for Critique Me!, an event where Girls Horse Club writers are inviting readers to critique their stories and poems with praise and/or constructive advice intended to help build confidence and improve writing/storytelling skills. Thanks in advance for your thoughtful insight!

by Rochlia, age 15

Sitting at the foot of a tree, a peasant girl watched as the sun rose slowly over the horizon. Though she had marveled at the sight many times before, it still had a special meaning to her. Light danced through the countless rows of