GirlsHorseClub.com Blog Archive on January 28, 2011, 13:17

WONDERS is a submission for Critique Me!, an event where Girls Horse Club writers are inviting readers to critique their stories and poems with praise and/or constructive advice intended to help build confidence and improve writing/storytelling skills. Thanks in advance for your thoughtful insight!

by palimnoponygirl, age 12

It may be a Lipizzaner
Doing a capriole;
Or a Shetland pony
Going for a stroll.

A dainty Morgan mare
Pulling a pony cart;
A Thoroughbred at the
Kentucky Derby,
Waiting for the start.

My Quarter