GirlsHorseClub.com Blog Archive on January 26, 2011, 13:41

LOST is a submission for Critique Me!, an event where Girls Horse Club writers are inviting readers to critique their stories and poems with praise and/or constructive advice intended to help build confidence and improve writing/storytelling skills. Thanks in advance for your thoughtful insight!

by caroline, age 12

A dreaded scene,
A scream cut short.
A leap for life,
A life is lost.
Once a stallion,
Wild and strong,
His spirit was fire,
So now, among others,
He dies.

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