The little pony’s dream Blog Archive on January 25, 2011, 14:24

THE LITTLE PONY’S DREAM is a submission for Critique Me!, an event where Girls Horse Club writers are inviting readers to critique their stories and poems with praise and/or constructive advice intended to help build confidence and improve writing/storytelling skills. Thanks in advance for your thoughtful insight!

by Mara, age 15

I  was this little pony, and  i was as white as the snow. Now for  my name is  Sugar Belle, but everyone just called me Sugar. All of my friends talked about there dreams of being rode on beaches with couples kissing in the sun

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