I Want Spring

GirlsHorseClub.com Blog Archive on January 24, 2011, 13:00

I WANT SPRING is a submission for Critique Me!, an event where Girls Horse Club writers are inviting readers to critique their stories and poems with praise and/or constructive advice intended to help build confidence and improve writing/storytelling skills. Thanks in advance for your thoughtful insight!

by catscowgirl, age 16

Frozen ground, freezing wind,
White ground, white sky,
I wish for spring,
Icy ground, frozen water,
Endless snow, endless wind,
I’m getting tired of this winter,
Falling snow, blowing wind,
Frost clinging

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