Horses Blog Archive on January 22, 2011, 14:41

HORSES is a submission for Critique Me!, an event where Girls Horse Club writers are inviting readers to critique their stories and poems with praise and/or constructive advice intended to help build confidence and improve writing/storytelling skills. Thanks in advance for your thoughtful insight!

by Geneva, age 7

Horse are the light of the world.

Horses make me smile, luckily I have my own.

They make me smile, they make me happy.

Riding like a cowboy, I will ride away on my horse’s back.

Trotting, galloping and jumping away,