Core Blog Archive on January 18, 2011, 14:11

CORE is a submission for Critique Me!, an event where Girls Horse Club writers are inviting readers to critique their stories and poems with praise and/or constructive advice intended to help build confidence and improve writing/storytelling skills. Thanks in advance for your thoughtful insight!

by HorseFeathers, age 17

I went out to the field where the horses run
In the grass stirring waves beneath the morning sun.
They pulled me into an everlasting prairie sea,
A place I was always meant to be.

I went out to the field, for I heard a plea