The Wild Mustang – Chapter 2 Blog Archive on August 14, 2009, 8:00

by Violet Inkpen, age 13


The world was dark and cold. Star was coughing water. She was floating in a place where there seemed to be nothing. No ground, no sky, nothing but cold, wet darkness. She opened her heavy eyelids and sneezed. Her chest was cold and she felt sick. All around her the current was pulling bits of bushes and sticks towards a location far away. Star struggled to stand but it was too deep.

“Ma!” she called out but no one was around. She felt so weak and her whole body felt half crushed because of the cold. She was numb all over and

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